I think everyone would at least have one animal that is been afraid of. Like me, I think I have afraid of lots of living thing, but the most animal that I afraid are cockroaches. Almost every time when I saw a cockroach, I’ll leave that place five to ten meters away, until someone has killed it or the cockroach leave. But this time I think is my bravest thing I have ever done. I have used the sprayer to kill a cockroach. This action has solved the problem that I afraid of cockroach.
I remember that night is when I was seventh grade, when I’m watching television. It is the middle of the program, suddenly my eyes have saw something that is brown and black, then the next second I knew that is a cockroach. Of course, and the next second I used the fastest speed that I have to run as far as I can. At first, I thought that I will not saw that cockroach in the other ten minutes, but really unluckily, it was still over there. Then I thought this is not a way to get out off the cockroach, and furthermore, I had already miss ten minutes of TV program, so I started to walk back to the room. Using small steps so that cockroach will not move. When I walked back to the room, I started to find something that can kill it, and then I saw a sprayer that kills the insect. So I used my small steps again to go get the sprayer, then I started to go near to the cockroach, and I sprayed to the cockroach for the first time, it failed. The cockroach starteed to ran to other place, and I’ve got more nervous because it runs so fast that I can’t even stay away from it. So I started to spray in everywhere, if I saw like a cockroach, I will spray over there. At last, the cockroach had died, but the room was messy, and it had a terrible smell in this room.
Although I had been yelled by my parents, I had still learned something about it. During this experience, I’ve learned about actually cockroach was not that scary, it still didn’t move if I walk more carefully. Also, I have learned that don’t give up, if I gave up after cockroach start to run, I might still afraid to killed a cockroach. And last, I have learned that next time killed a cockroach don’t need to be that crazy, actually I had heard many people said just need to spray like soap water then it will died, or else I might be yelled at next time when I kill a cockroach.
This is good Jimmy.
ReplyDeleteA few things:
Your verbs, as usual.
Because you're talking about one cockroach most of the time in this story, you'll call it 'the cockroach,' except the first time you introduce it when it is 'a cockroach.'
I kind of remember that night is when I was seventh grade (you don't 'kind of' remember it; you do remember it)
Correct and I'll grade it, but check carefully. There are a lot of verb errors.