Monday, September 20, 2010

"The Pearl" Ch1&2 Summary

At first, they had woke up from the morning near the beach, they ate breakfast, but then Coyotito had been hurt by a scorpion. Juana told the neighbor to call the doctor to come, but he won't, so Kino, Juana, Coyotito, and all the neighbors went to the city to find the doctor. When they arrived in front of the doctor's house, they have saw the doctor's house was like where rich people lives. They have asked the doctor to save Coyotito but because they didn't have money, he didn't want to help the baby. And because they didn't have money, they and other people started to sit on the canoe and going to caught some oyster and find some little pearl. And very lucky, when they took the basket up, they can't believe what they saw. There was a pearl that is big as a seagull's egg, as perfect as the moon.

1 comment:

  1. Verb problems Jimmy. Put your first sentence and almost all your other verbs in past tense, not past perfect. (asked is past, have asked is past perfect)

    sit on the canoe to going to caught (can you see what's wrong here?)

    There are a lot of verb problems. Check the whole thing carefully.

    Correct and pass.

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