Sunday, September 26, 2010
"The Pearl" Ch1&2 Reader's Response
When they were waking up in the morning, I felt Kino isn't very care and love this family. Kino and Juana didn't have eat together, and the baby, Coyotito was only been take care by Juana, it seems like Kino didn't care about the baby. But after I finished another few lines. I knew that Kino and Juana were care about the little baby, especially Juana, because when Coyotito was going to be hurt by the scorpion, both of them were very carefully wanted to remove the scorpion, also when Coyotito had been hurt by it, Juana have shouted to the neighbor that call the doctor to here. When the family and their neighbor arrived to the city, I can felt that it's a lot of difference between where they lived and the people live in city, and also the doctor's house,too. Most of the people lived in city are rich, their house had pool and many birds are singing, but the poor people only could live in the house made by brush. I really felt angry to that doctor. That doctor didn't want to help the baby just because the family didn't have money. I think the doctor should help all the people even they didn't have money. When they were in the sea to find some small pearl, I think Juana was wishing that they can find some pearl, or else her baby might died. Because she had wish very strongly, and both of them were very lucky, they had found a pearl that is big as a seagull's egg.
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Same thing here. Check your verbs. Most will be past tense. A few will be different. For example, "because when Coyotito is ready to be going to hurt by the scorpion." This should be
ReplyDeletebecause when Coyotito was going to be hurt by the scorpion
Otherwise pretty good. Go through and fix your verbs and pass.